Saturday, August 22, 2009

A Darkover Retrospective: Marion Zimmer Bradley's writing beginnings

One important thing for a writer is to learn from the example of the careers of other writers. A very inspirational source for me has been Marion Zimmer Bradley's A Darkover Retrospective, which is included in a volume which collects 'The Planet Savers' and 'Sword of Aldones', the first two Darkover books ever published.

Sword of Aldones is the hardest to obtain of all the Darkover books. She essentially re-wrote the story told in Sword of Aldones in the much more mature work, Sharra's Exile.

Marion Zimmer Bradley explains in A Darkover Retrospective why the Sword of Aldones seems to be such an immature work--- she began working on its original form as a teen.

In the beginning, the world of Darkover was called Al-Merdin, and the Comyn--- the telepathic caste--- were called the Seveners, and consisted of seven families with telepathic gifts. The Hasturs, the Elhalyn, the Serrais, the Ardais and the Aldarans were, even at this early stage, much the same as in the Darkover books we know. The Altons were then known as the Leyniers, and the Aillards were then the Marceau of Valeron.

What i find most interesting is that here is a story, started by a fifteen year old girl, which became a series which the writer continued to her death (and beyond.) The story grew and changed as the author did--- which is why the series is more inconsistant than more closely planned series.

Although the Darkover books are commonly called a series, MZB herself did not like the term. For her, a series meant the sort of series--- perhaps a trilogy--- which was really just one very long book, which had to be read in order, and in which any given volume might end in a cliffhanger instead of a resolution.

MZB had her own code for writing Darkover stories. She wanted each volume to be a stand-alone story, with a resolution at the end. She didn't want to assume the reader of any new Darkover book had read the others and so was familiar with the world, its customs and its characters, and she wrote accordingly.

A Darkover Retrospective tells the story of the writing of many of MZB's early Darkover books, and also tells the story of her writing career--- from writing stories for small amounts of money, as well as writing 'potboiler' gothics and even editing an astrology magazine to provide extra family income, from her gradual realization that she was in fact regarded by editors and readers as a 'real' writer, and that this was something she could make a career of.

She also gives us an account of the various changes within the science fiction writing scene at the time and how she interacted with them--- the things she embraced, and the things, like the political/feminist science fiction novel, that she did not enjoy.

The label MZB uses for the genre of fiction that the Darkover books represent is 'science fantasy'. The books are science fiction in that they are set on another planet, with all the trappings of space travel. Yet they are fantasy-like in that there are sword-fights, and 'magic', though this is in the form of psionics--- telepathy, telekinesis and the like, all of which are deemed to have scientific explanations.

The 'Pern' series by Anne McCaffrey is similarly 'science fantasy'--- it's set on another planet, and though there are dragons, they were created by genetic engineering. But otherwise the label 'science fantasy' seems to be little used these days, and I presume that means that when pitching a novel that the writer might consider science fantasy, one is better off not using the words, but just pointing out the similarity to Darkover.

I found 'A Darkover Retrospective' sufficiently useful that I would have wanted to buy the volume containing it even if I had both of the Darkover novels in the book in other editions (I had 'The Planet Savers' but not 'Sword of Aldones'). For me, it's worth re-reading from time to time just as inspiration.


The Planet Savers/The Sword of Aldones

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Thursday, August 20, 2009

Write a book along with Holly Lisle

Author Holly Lisle, whose web site is a treasure trove for the writer or would-be writer, has a new feature 'Write a book with me'.

She shares a little about the progress of her current book, and those participating share their word-counts and issues with one another in the form of comments to her blog entries. To view the latest post, here is the 'Write a book with me category'.

I'm considering whether to play along, myself. So far sharing about my works in progress has been more embarrassing than encouraging--- not because of what people say or don't say, but because I just look back at what I wrote about with intense shame. (My internal editor is Adolf Hitler.) But I have just started a fantasy story, one about an orphan whose new legal guardian is an evil mage, and who finds an interesting solution to that dilemma which leads to only more trouble.

I'd really like to hear from anyone who is or might be participating in Holly Lisle's 'Write a book with me' project. Drop me a comment!




Wednesday, August 19, 2009

Offworld Blog Tour: Day Three

This is the third day of the blog tour for the book 'Offworld' by Robin Parrish. To wrap things up with my impressions of the book--- it's fast paced and full of adventure. It reminds me a bit of Stephen King's 'The Stand', without the cast of thousands.

A (former) Pagan's View of 'Offworld'
As some regular readers of this blog may know, I was formerly for many years a member of a Neopagan religion (Norse Pagan, to be more precise), though I am now a Christian. I started reading Christian fiction long before I ever dreamed I would ever be a Christian myself. And so I feel qualified to give some hints as to how 'Offworld' will stack up to the Pagan reader.

'Offworld' is not the kind of book where the action stops so that characters can share long stories about how they got 'saved', or give Bible lectures that (sometimes) tie into the plot. It's a lot of fast action and any hints about the Christian faith of the heroes and lack of such in the villains aren't jarring enough to slow down the Pagan reader or spoil the enjoyment of the book.

Supernatural elements of a Christian nature do creep in toward the end, but I hasten to assure the Pagan reader that we DON'T find out that the whole plot is just a hallucination caused by the near-death experience of an unsaved dude about to be dragged off to hell if he can't wake up and repent in time--- that's a whole 'nother book.

The rating on the Worldview Intrusiveness Scale for 'Offworld' is about a 3 on a scale of 1-10. This scale (invented for this blog tour) is about how visible the worldview of the author--- in this case a Christian one--- is to a reader who doesn't share that viewpoint. For comparison, the Christian content of the Lord of the Rings series rates at a low 1, because many readers don't even know the author was Christian from the content, while I would give the novel 'Children of the Night' by Mercedes Lackey, featuring Wiccan heroine Diana Tregard, about a 6 or 7 since it does have rather strong Wiccan content.


I must hasten to point out that I am NOT saying, from my current Christian point of view, that 'Offworld' is does not have enough Christian content, or that certain other Christian fiction works have too much--- or that Mercedes Lackey's 'Children of the Night' has too much Wiccan content. It's actually a good thing that authors have the freedom to diverge in the issue of how much Christian content there should be in a Christian novel, and how obvious it should be. However, just as the Christian reader dislikes reading a novel by a secularist in which all the bad guys are Christians, non-Christians of various stripes don't like to read a Christian-authored novel and read as the Christian characters proclaim that they don't understand how anyone could be so stupid as to not believe in Jesus now (as happens in several places in the Left Behind series.)

But enough irrelevant rambling--- now to the important stuff--- cat updates! My cat Kitten-thief has been reunited with her sole surviving kitten, Maru, and locked in a cage so she is obliged to take care of it. As for the kittens she stole, all five of Tohru's kittens have been found--- one, scared out of its wits, was in the goat pen being tended by a mother goat--- but one kitten of The Grey One seems to be gone for good--- luckily The Grey One has another kitten left. (Mind you, I have far too many cats and would be better off if none of the kittens had made it.)

Blog Tour Stuff
*Featured book, Offworld - http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/0764206060Robin Parrish’s Web site - http://www.robinparrish.com/Robin Parrish’s blog - http://twitter.com/robinparrish (that’s the address he gives for his blog on his Web site)
*Participants’ Links:

Brandon Barr
Jim Black
Justin Boyer
Keanan Brand
Gina Burgess
Canadianladybug
Melissa Carswell
Valerie Comer
Karri Compton
Amy Cruson
CSFF Blog Tour
Stacey Dale
D. G. D. Davidson
Jeff Draper
April Erwin
Karina Fabian
Linda Gilmore
Beth Goddard
Todd Michael Greene
Katie Hart
Ryan Heart
Becky Jesse
Cris Jesse
Jason Joyner
Julie
Carol Keen
Krystine Kercher
Dawn King
Melissa Meeks
Rebecca LuElla Miller
Mirtika
Eve Nielsen (posting later in the week)
Nissa
John W. Otte
Lyn Perry
Steve Rice
Chawna Schroeder
James Somers
Speculative Faith
Stephanie
Rachel Starr Thomson
Steve Trower
Fred Warren
Dona Watson
Elizabeth Williams




Tuesday, August 18, 2009

How Robin Parrish got his First Novel Published

Photo credit: Ashley Morgan.
Getting a novel published these days can be hard, even if your novel is good. The advent of home computers with word processing software has increased the number of people able to throw a manuscript together by great amounts. Most of these novels are bad, and most publishers and agents have received so many that they adopt draconian policies to avoid unsolicited manuscripts and unproven writers.

Robin Parrish, author of our current blog tour book Offworld, found away around the barriers. He had a website called Infuze. One of his ideas for Infuze was to have a serialized story, with new sections brought out every two weeks. His website became popular enough that several publishers became aware of the story and were willing to publish.

Can other writers use Robin Parrish's method? Possibly--- but the story in question not only needs to be well-written, it needs to be a real page-turner that will get the reader totally addicted and coming back for more. It must be posted on a website or blog with a lot of traffic. And the writer must have a lot of luck!

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OFFICIAL BLOG TOUR STUFF:
THE BOOK: Offworld by Robin Parrish: http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/0764206060
THE AUTHOR: Robin Parrish on Twitter (Yes, he tweets): http://twitter.com/robinparrish
THE BLOG TOUR GANG:
Brandon Barr
Jim Black
Justin Boyer
Keanan Brand
Gina Burgess
Canadianladybug
Melissa Carswell
Valerie Comer
Karri Compton
Amy Cruson
CSFF Blog Tour
Stacey Dale
D. G. D. Davidson
Jeff Draper
April Erwin
Karina Fabian
Linda Gilmore
Beth Goddard
Todd Michael Greene
Katie Hart
Ryan Heart
Becky Jesse
Cris Jesse
Jason Joyner
Julie
Carol Keen
Krystine Kercher
Dawn King
Melissa Meeks
Rebecca LuElla Miller
Mirtika
Eve Nielsen (posting later in the week)
nissa_amas_katoj
John W. Otte
Lyn Perry
Steve Rice
Chawna Schroeder
James Somers
Speculative Faith
Stephanie
Rachel Starr Thomson
Steve Trower
Fred Warren
Dona Watson
Elizabeth Williams




Kitty from 'The Closer' dies on screen and in real life

I've missed a few episodes of 'The Closer' and so I didn't know that Brenda's cat Kitty had died on the series until my mother told me recently.

I looked it up online and found out that this storyline was created because Miss Kitty, the cat who plays the role of Kitty, was dying, and they didn't want to replace her. Read more about it here.

Hate to admit it, but I actually cried while composing this kitty-obituary. Which is strange, because yesterday I didn't cry when two real-life kittens of mine kicked the bucket due to being abandoned by their mom, Kitten-thief. (Another mother cat, Tohru, is tending the surviving kitten, while Kitten-thief is busy stealing Tohru's eight-week-old kittens and hiding them in the basement.)

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All Cats Have Asperger Syndrome




Monday, August 17, 2009

Offworld: A Book with a Movie Trailer


Yes, it's right, Offworld, the new novel by Robin Parrish and subject of this month's CSFF blog tour, has its own movie trailer, embedded above. This, like the blog tour itself, is part of the Brave New World of book marketing.

I have read that at one time the science fiction publishing field was so small that the science fiction fan would pick up any book with a rocketship on the cover, regardless of author, looking for a good read.

Now there are vast numbers of science fiction books coming from major publishers, niche publishers such as Bethany House, publisher of Offworld, and even self-published works. Writers and their publishers need to do more to stand out from the crowd. Hence, Offworld has a movie trailer.

Question: does Offworld's trailer work for you? I was impressed by it, but then again I had already received my review copy of Offworld (one of the benefits of participating in a blog tour), and had read the whole thing the first day--- NOT what I usually do with blog tour books, they seldom catch my fancy the way books I pick out for myself do. Is the trailer too much of a gimmick, or did it make you want to read the book? Please comment!

If the trailer did make you want to read the book, Robin Parrish provides a bit of instant gratification: he not only provides the first chapter for free on his web site (see below), but has an embeddable version for people like me to put on their blogs. Here it is:
Offworld

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OFFICIAL BLOG TOUR STUFF:
THE BOOK: Offworld by Robin Parrish: http://www.amazon.com/exec/obidos/ASIN/0764206060
THE AUTHOR: Robin Parrish on Twitter (Yes, he tweets): http://twitter.com/robinparrish
THE BLOG TOUR GANG:
Brandon Barr
Jim Black
Justin Boyer
Keanan Brand
Gina Burgess
Canadianladybug
Melissa Carswell
Valerie Comer
Karri Compton
Amy Cruson
CSFF Blog Tour
Stacey Dale
D. G. D. Davidson
Jeff Draper
April Erwin
Karina Fabian
Linda Gilmore
Beth Goddard
Todd Michael Greene
Katie Hart
Ryan Heart
Becky Jesse
Cris Jesse
Jason Joyner
Julie
Carol Keen
Krystine Kercher
Dawn King
Melissa Meeks
Rebecca LuElla Miller
Mirtika
Eve Nielsen (posting later in the week)
nissa_amas_katoj
John W. Otte
Lyn Perry
Steve Rice
Chawna Schroeder
James Somers
Speculative Faith
Stephanie
Rachel Starr Thomson
Steve Trower
Fred Warren
Dona Watson
Elizabeth Williams

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Sunday, August 16, 2009

Kodocha: Sana's Stage


Sometimes I want to be Miho Obana when I grow up..... Who is Miho Obana? She's the comic-book-drawing girl who wrote and illustrated the shojo manga* series Kodocha: Sana's Stage.

Sana is just a typical Japanese schoolgirl--- except that she's a child actress, her mom's a novelist who wears a chipmunk in her hair, and her manager, Rei, is a homeless guy who followed her home....

Sana's got a great life, except for school. The boys in Sana's class are all wild and drive the teacher to tears. They're like a gang of monkeys! And the worst of all is the boss monkey, Akito Hayama. He actually is blackmailing the teachers! He caught Sana's teacher kissing another teacher, took a picture of it, and is using it to stop the teachers from dealing with the chaos.

Sana decides to take a stand. With the help of Tsuyoshi, a boy who has a crush on her, she takes her own blackmail photo of Akito in his underwear.

Sana's on top of the world when she defeats Akito--- until she finds out about Akito's family. Akito's sister hates him because their mother died giving birth to Akito--- she calls him a demon child and a monster. Sana makes it her mission to fix up Akito's messed-up family, even though Akito would rather she didn't.

The series goes on to a lot more of Sana's adventures--- for example, the story of how Sana, an adopted child, finds her birth mother. I really loved the series, as far as I have been able to read it, it has a great eccentric cast of characters and features great art-work.

There is also an anime (television cartoon) version of Kodocha and I saw that first, back when Colors TV on Dish Network ran some anime series at night. Kodocha wasn't one of my first favorites--- I liked Fruits Basket, Negima, and Slayers better, because they are all fantasy-based series. But when Colors TV began dumping all my favorites and Kodocha, Case Closed, and the dreadful DragonBall series were all that was left I found that Kodocha really grows on you (like a fungus, only it doesn't smell like one.)

If you haven't tried reading manga before, this might be a good one to start out with, and since it's an older one, secondhand copies can be bought for cheap. Sometimes, anyway. I'd like to get the books I don't have and the DVDs of the anime as well, but that won't happen unless Bill Gates or Warren Buffet happens to be reading this blog and takes pity on me and buys them for me.

*manga is a Japanese comic book, and shojo manga is a manga aimed at a girl audience.

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KODOCHA: Sana's Stage, Volume 1
Kodocha: Season One Box Set DVD



Saturday, August 15, 2009

Can Alien Invaders Really Learn our Languages from Radio?

It's a common scenario. Alien craft appear in our skies, devastate our cities. Three hours later the alien overlord contacts the UN. "We have learned your simple language from your radio transmissions," Kodos boasts in English--- then in French, Russian, Chinese.....

But is this feasible? First, is it even possible to learn a completely unfamiliar language based on radio broadcasts? Long ago, when I was an enthusiastic shortwave radio listener, I often listened to a half-hour of Chinese or Ukranian broadcasting waiting for the language I really wanted to be on (usually, German, Esperanto or even English). I could often understand a word or two of a language I hadn't learned.

But that was because the language used and mine had roots in common, or had borrowed words from one another. In addition, proper names of world leaders and locations gave me clues as to what the story was about. An alien race would not have any of these clues.

In the Balance by Harry Turtledove starts off with an alien attack and then the foreign ministers of major Earth powers are summoned to meet with Atvar, the alien fleetlord. The aliens already have translators who have learned Earth languages through the radio, helped only by computers which use the frequency of a word to guess at the meaning.

Would that work? In English, among the most commmon words are the definite article "the" and the indefinite article "a/an". In Esperanto, the definite article "la" is also common, but there is no indefinite article at all. And the Russian language lacks both definite and indefinite articles! How is a computer program going to predict that?

A computer can be programmed to 'listen' to a stream of talk in an unknown language and transcribe it phonetically. But can a computer learn where one word starts and another begins? For example: mimanghaslafishon. How is that broken into words? Is the first word 'mimanghas'? 'Mi'? 'Mimangh'? Or is the whole utterance one long word? (In fact, it is 'Mi manghas la fishon'.

A computer also can't tell which sound differences are important in the language in question. The sound we represent by 'p' and the sound 'b' differ only in that one is voiced and one is unvoiced. In Korean that doesn't seem to make much difference. The name 'Ban Ki-moon' is often transliterated 'Pan Ki-moon'. But in English that sound difference does make a difference--- 'butt' and 'putt' are two very different words, not one word with two meanings.

I find it difficult to believe that radio alone would, even after many years, teach an alien an Earth language. There is just no way to connect the sounds with the meanings. (Television might be a help--- aliens will learn that a red can is called 'coca-cola' and a bottle is a 'pepsi'.) But even if it is possible, there is the time factor to consider.

On Earth, the easiness of a language, as far is learning it is concerned, is based on how similar it is to the language one is used to. English and German are in the same language family, and so a German can learn English, or an English speaker learn German, fairly quickly. English and Chinese are related very distantly if at all, and so it is much more difficult for a Chinese person to learn English--- even the ones who learned it in school for twelve years might not speak it well. An Earth language and an alien one are even more different than that, and would probably take many years to learn.

In the Worldwar series, there is another factor that author Harry Turtledove didn't properly take into account. His alien Race (AKA 'Lizards') say that their homeworld has had only one language for hundreds of thousands of years, and that this language is the only one used on the two other worlds the Race has conquered. It is strongly implied that the Race knows only the one language. Therefore, the members of the Race assigned to learn Earth languages and become translators have never learned another language before, and so would learn Earth languages slowly. A human who knew several Earth language, on the other hand, would learn Lizard language more quickly, and so it would make more sense for the Race to be using captured humans as translators, at least in the beginning.

How do we invade Earth with a greater degree of linguistic logic? First, if the aliens have the technology to conquer Earth, they likely have the technology to secretly send a few shuttles down to Earth five, ten or fifteen years in advance of the conquest, to kidnap some representative humans to learn Earth languages and other strategic information. A hint of this sort of practice would be a good idea in a swift-conquest story.

Otherwise, you are stuck with perhaps three months in which little to no communication is possible, and perhaps nine months after that in which communication relies wholly on rather bad translations.


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In the Balance by Harry Turtledove (Worldwar, Volume 1)
Tilting the Balance (Worldwar Series, Volume 2)




Friday, August 14, 2009

Urgent: Sign Petition to help Autistic boy keep his pet pig

Anthony, an autistic boy in Fayetteville, N. C., has a pet potbellied pig, Loopey, which serves him as a therapy animal. But his life may soon be shattered because of local zoning laws which classify the animal as 'livestock'.

As a person with an autism spectrum disorder, I know how important things like pets can be to an autistic child. Read the story at PeoplePets to see how this pig changed Anthony's life.

Please go to The Petition Site to sign the Loopey for Autism petition.

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Learn more about Autism:
Autism Spectrum Disorders: The Complete Guide to Understanding Autism, Asperger's Syndrome, Pervasive Developmental Disorder, and Other ASDs





Thursday, August 13, 2009

Promoting a book or blog in the Darwinian underworld of Reddit.com

Does your blog have enough blog traffic? What about the other blogs you enjoy reading? Do you want to help your book, or a book written by a friend or favorite author, sell better?

The various types of social networking sites are one answer to that problem, and one site I've used is Reddit.com. Most of what I submit to Reddit.com sinks like a stone, but the right stuff, promoted the right way, can really get you a lot of hits on your stat counter. I hasten to add that no amount of promotion at any site will help a boring or badly written blog entry, so work on your quality first.

There is a useful article at Marketing Blagger that will teach you the basics of using Reddit.com. Read it well before you get started. But there are some things that Marketing Blagger won't tell you.

Things that you post on Reddit.com can be downvoted or upvoted. Marketing Blagger says that a 'poorly written' blog post will be downvoted quickly. That's not quite true.

Reddit.com seems to be a hangout for atheism fanboys. Seconds after you submit any article with Christian related content, it will receive several downvotes. Once your article gets at -4, no one will see it, so that much content won't even get read at all. (You don't need to actually visit the article to downvote it, you can do so just based on the title.)

By 'Christian related content', I don't just mean content written by Christians or showing a Christian worldview. If you posted an article 'Pope falls down in shower', that would likely to be downvoted--- you'd be better off to write 'Evil criminal Pope didn't die after fall in shower, worse luck.'

Subreddits are less competitive that way. But the Christianity subreddit mostly contains material submitted by hostile atheists, so Christian material won't stand a chance there.

The secret to Reddit.com success is to use it only for those blog posts that will not raise red flags with the hardcore crowd. Choose the title for what you submit very carefully--- it doesn't have to be the same as the title of the blog post itself, it just must be a fair summation of the item.

Which subreddit to use? Larger ones are better--- the very small ones don't get noticed at all. But the most major ones are lurking spots for hostile downvoters. I have had good luck submitting material related to Doctor Who and Torchwood to the Doctor Who subreddit. The writing subreddit is good for writing-related posts. The abortion subreddit is read only by prochoicers, and the prolife reddit is read only by me, at this time (your submissions welcome.)

There is also a subreddit called 'lostgenre', named after the Lost Genre Guild, which is dedicated to Christian science fiction and fantasy. While it is another one that lacks members, all are welcome to participate.

Book reviews are best submitted to a subreddit related to the genre of the book. An interview with the author of the book might go in a genre subreddit, or in the writing subreddit, depending largely on the contents.

Reddit.com, like many other social media outlets, provides buttons you can post on your material--- see the one below--- so that the readers of your blog who are Reddit users can easily submit your material.

You should not submit too much to Reddit at once. You will be noticed and people will take offence. Submit one or two items a day at most. And if the work in question is your own writing, start out with no more than one self-submission per week. Spend some time enjoying, upvoting and commenting positively on other people's material on Reddit.

One final piece of advice for the use of all social media: Don't go overboard. Find one or two social media sites that you like, and that work well for you, and stick with them. Don't have buttons and badges from a hundred different social media sites cluttering up your blog!!!
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ProBlogger: Secrets for Blogging Your Way to a Six-Figure Income
Plug Your Book! Online Book Marketing for Authors, Book Publicity through Social Networking
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Wednesday, August 12, 2009

You Are Not Alone: Dan Lacey's Michael Jackson portrait



My favorite artist, Dan Lacey, who formerly drew the 'faithmouse' cartoon, has done this lovely oil painting of Michael Jackson. I thought it was a nice touch that Jesus was wearing one sequined glove, but did not have a pancake on His head. (Lacey's going through a 'pancake on people's heads' phase.)

I have not seen Dan Lacey's blog (http://faithmouse.blogspot.com) for some time. He has also garnered national attention for his portraits of Barack Obama naked on a unicorn (the unicorn's body covers the president's naughty bits). Lacey is selling some of his work, including many Michael Jackson portraits, on eBay, and you will find a link to them on his blog.

I had some strong feelings when Michael Jackson died. The man's life had become a bit of a freakshow, he was accused of horrible things, and he did have horrible bad judgment--- as witnessed by naming his sons Prince Michael Jackson and Prince Michael Jackson II. But he was a suffering human being and he did a great deal for a number of charitable causes.

I hope that Michael repented for his sins (whatever they were---God knows, not us) and turned to Jesus, before he died. Because Jesus is a Michael Jackson fan....





A Writer's Show-and-Tell

Okay, so here I am sitting down to write a story. My main character is tall, red-haired and has a long tail. So--- I write: "Melinda was tall, red-haired and had a long tail."

But--- wait a minute! A writer is supposed to show, not tell, and that was telling. So--- I pen a scene illustrating the fact that Melinda was tall, another one that established that she was red-haired, and a third scene where we very definitely are informed about the tail thing.

I re-read. Eww, ick! My story is now cluttered with three irrelevant scenes! And while 'show, don't tell' is supposedly an important rule, the much more important one is this--- EVERYTHING in a story, even the stuff that seems thrown in to give it color and flavor, is there to do one thing--- to move the story forward.

Sometimes that means--- especially in a science fiction or fantasy work where there is quite a bit of infomation the reader needs to have to understand the story--- that you have to tell things.

A section of story where you tell some things is called an info-dump. Like the contents of a nuclear waste dump, an info-dump can grow too big to be safe, so unless you want your readers to glow in the dark, keep the amount conveyed in any one dump small.

Some writers convey information in dialog. So, instead of saying 'the alien Lizards only had one language back on their planet, Home, you have a bit of dialog where the alien Lizard Ttomalss says 'Why do you Big Uglies (humans) have so many languages? On Home, we have had only one language for tens of thousands of our years.'

The dialog method can go very badly wrong. When you find yourself conveying loads of information in dialog, and, worse, when your characters are telling one another things they obviously already know, you are writing dreadful dialog and must be stopped. No one wants to read, 'As you know, Kodos, our home planet is so civilized that we have not had a war in fifty trillion years,' said Kang. 'And as you surely know,' said Kang, 'our official planetary sport was changed from public executions to bikini designing a million years ago. Aren't we just so civilized!'

READING ASSIGNMENT: Reading the novel of your choice, take note on how the author is giving you information. How do you learn what the main character looks like, for example? (I hope there were no mirrors involved.) What came in the form of 'telling' and what was 'showing'? Do you feel the author made the right decisions on when to tell and when to show?

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How to Write Science Fiction & Fantasy by Orson Scott Card
On the Prowl by Patricia Briggs
Write Great Fiction - Dialogue

Tuesday, August 11, 2009

Have You Ordered Your 2010 Writer's Market Yet?

One of the first things I learned about being a REAL writer is the importance of the annual publication 'Writer's Market'. It is a complete list of the legitimite publishers of books and of articles and stories.

It gives you vital information on each publisher: what the editors' names are, what sort of writing they are looking for, what they are NOT looking for, how to submit your work to them, and so on. It gives you an edge over other writers who don't use Writer's Market, or have an out of date copy of the book.

In addition, there are also articles on publishing trends and interviews with editors and authors. There are also the basics on the requirements for submitting a professional manuscript.

Writer's Market comes in a number of flavors--- the generic version, one for short story and novel writers, one for poets, and so on. A different publisher puts out an annual guide to markets for Christian writers, but they don't have their 2010 edition out on Amazon.com yet.

While the Writer's Market is essential for looking like a professional when you submit your writing, I'm afraid I haven't been able to order mine quite yet. But if a few of you kind people are nice enough to order yours through one of my links, I will be able to. (*thanks!*)

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2010 Novel & Short Story Writer's Market (Novel and Short Story Writer's Market)
2010 Writer's Market
Christian Writers' Market Guide 2009

Sunday, August 9, 2009

BBC's Being Human

If you watched Torchwood week on BBC America, you already know about Being Human. In fact, you've probably seen so many promos for it that you not only are resolved not to watch it, but long to destroy everyone involved with the series. But that might be a mistake.

The series involves a vampire, a werewolf and a ghost living together. The vampire is named Mitchell, is one hundred years old, and has given up drinking blood. The werewolf is George, who is Jewish and worries that being a werewolf isn't kosher.

The ghost is Annie. She lived in the apartment with her boyfriend when she died. She likes Mitchell and George because they can see her--- ordinary people can't, mostly. In the most recent episode, Mitchell and George introduce her to another ghost--- a male--- and they begin to date. But then Annie remembers the real cause of her death--- her old boyfriend Owen murdered her.

It's true the series is a bit of a me-too effort in the world of supernatural television and fiction, and they are rather derivitive in refering to the full moon as George's 'time of the month'. But it's quite enjoyable and beginning to be a bit amusing--- except for the nudity, which is VERY amusing, as George is often shown before or after his change, stark naked and clutching Little George for modesty as he runs like hell. (I know, it's not very respectable of me, but I find male genitalia incredibly humorous and enjoy the occasional glimpse.)

So: what you YOU think of Being Human? What are the best and worst things about it? Who is your favorite character? Please drop a comment and join the conversation!

Being Human: Official Site: http://www.bbcamerica.com/content/369/index.jsp
Being Human: Wikipedia: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Being_Human_(TV_series)
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